Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Health plays an important role in the life of every individual the reason why work space issue related to their health is that they do less physical Movement in their job period or in their free time.
On the one hand the reason of not doing proper workout is that the laborer are busy for doing their what firstly the workers are busy to achieve their targets during their 9 to 5 as a result of it they peach their home late as well as they wake up late in morning. recent studies have shown that most of people experience the problem related to their health it has been mostly observed in worker because they do not make any effort to make them self fit. Secondly in their free time work force want to spend the time while watching movies or playing games on internet. for example an Indian actor faces is the issue of health because he did not indulge himself in any kind of physical activity .
On the other hand the solution to handle this problem is that the physical fitness Center should be opened in the working area most importantly the working hours should be reduced then employees can work out to keep themselves fit. additionally there should not be any type of burden to the worker because if tell our team of mind then they can do their work as early as possible and then they should have a time to make themselves feet due to this the helper can do exercise daily
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chieve their targets during their 9 to 5 As a result of it they peach their home ...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ate in morning recent studies show that most of people experience the problem related to their...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le an Indian actor faces is the issue of after his retirement because in his free...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37307692308 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08832695416 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526923076923 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.996614536 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 284.25 106.682146367 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.25 7.06120827912 386% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295067272283 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172480634464 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482025537596 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202589984599 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312529530109 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.7 13.0946893788 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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