Many people are opting for holistic medicine rather than conventional medicine as a form of treatment for incurable diseases.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of such practice?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, diseases are tremendously increasing which in turn have arised the need for their treatments. There are many individuals who are preferring to go with Ayurvedic or Homeopathic treatments rather than the Allopathy medicines especially for the diseases which have no cure such as Cancer. This is due to the certain benefits associated with it. There are various pros and cons of it which are discussed below.
To begin with the advantages of holistic medicine, the first and foremost benefit is there are no side-effects associated with it. Infact, it can be easily consumed by small age children which sometimes is not possible in case of allopathy treatments. Furthermore, there are several options to avail under this approach. For instance, Ayurveda, Homeopathy, Yoga etcetera. These help in the overall physical and mental well being of a person. Notwithstanding, these medicines are proven to eradicate the problems from its roots. In addition to this, these medicines are very light which does not harm the other body parts of a person whereas in case of conventional medicine, the patient has to oftenly suffer.
Nevertheless, there are some limitations too. One of which is, the treatments are very time-consuming. It starts slowly reacting into the body. On the other hand, in allopathy treatments are robust. Besides, these treatments are not followed in case of emergency situations where immediate help is required. For instance, there may be a requirement of operation or surgery. Moreover, there are many diseases, solutions of which are not available in holistic medicine.
To recapitulate, It varies from case to case that which option one need to adopt. It is difficult to make an opinion about one. Pros and cons always remain with every choice. What in actual required is the rational decision by an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26013513514 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95485688937 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9642305166 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7727272727 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177820964195 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043599877445 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568389154882 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10497791949 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573904257453 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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