Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it could cause problems. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals opine that it can pose several challenges if professionals are permitted to continue working even after they turn 60. I agree with this opinion to a great extent.
When seniors continue to work even after the normal retirement age, there will be fewer job opportunities for young people. This will have serious socio-economic repercussions as youngsters are in a greater need of jobs than seniors. If they cannot find a job, they may fall into depression and some of them may even engage in anti-social activities to earn money.
Another downside of allowing seniors to continue to work is that it can affect the productivity of the organisations. While it is true that they are highly experienced, they have difficulty adapting to the new-age workplaces driven by technology. For example, many old people still are not comfortable using the internet or computers. This will affect the productivity of the company. Older people are also more likely to experience health problems. They may call in sick more frequently. They are also more likely to make mistakes while discharging their duties due to their diminishing cognitive skills. Because of these reasons, they cannot be allowed to drive vehicles or operate heavy machinery.
Seniors who must work because of their poor financial situation are also more likely to be exploited by employers. Since young people can be hired for much lower salaries, companies will certainly prefer to hire fresh talent. In such situations, a senior who desperately needs a job will have to work for more or less the same salary as a youngster although they have decades of experience behind them.
In conclusion, allowing people to work even after the standard retirement age might benefit some elderly people who really need a job; however, this arrangement is largely negative and creates more problems than it solves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, more or less, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16993464052 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83290925655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1271176501 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193522177771 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602532231296 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670097744122 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12984286828 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808453703284 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.