We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should
only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The school of thought that each country and associated community should be accountable for gazillion problems that can emerge any time within their own boundary. Although many people favor it stating that it is almost impossible to offer help to every individual on this globe, however, I am in discord with this statement. As I think that while following humanitarian ethical values along with residing on a common planet, and facing similar issues, it is our duty as a whole to be available to everyone for help. This essay would endeavor to shed some light on numerous issues that prompt us to be part of this vicious cycle.
To begin with, no one is ignorant of bizarre unprecedented times such as natural disasters, pandemics, and internal wars among nations that can cause severe damage to humanity. In such a scenario, it is highly shameful to be self-centered and mean, instead we should stand as a global community to grapple such an issue while stimulating people to come forward to join hands. For instance, Coronavirus teamed up everyone to share responsibility in terms of vaccine and worldwide safety restrictions.
Another supporting idea is to eradicate entrenched social and economic problems that have engulfed our societies like poverty, gender inequality, illiteracy, unemployment, and healthcare deficiencies. While considering the world as a family, we should put our sincere efforts to gobble up this rampant situation. For example, besides serving our own boundaries, we should instigate communities to make some valuable donations as funds, technical help, and by facilitating help to unfortunate ones.
To conclude, it is erroneous to believe that we are only restricted to limited horizons with regard to serving humanity. In my opinion, amid any inevitable situation and to curb any ingrained fallacy within a community or country, everyone should provide their indispensable support at the human levels.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35830618893 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98572894667 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644951140065 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.8324872987 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.083333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334296350556 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104221071939 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610558514104 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176793827398 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617120779645 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.