Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In the world of today, it is accepted that pre-dated medicines are used by many people all over the world. In my opinion, this idea is completely dangerous for individuals and I will discuss briefly in the following paragraphs.
To embark on, there are several reasons for this phenomenon. First and foremost, people use references from their friends or relatives to use medicine because medicine is useful for some particular illness so that people also recommend it to others. For a real-life example, Allegra is widely spread for allergy therefore these days people purchase it without doctor advice. In addition to this, some therapies are usually the same for the long-term such as accident injuries and many more. That is why people prefer to do these therapies when the same action is happening in their life. Furthermore, in the competitive field, some numerous industries are made the same medicine. For this reason, people do not hesitate to use alternative medicine of the same tag.
In the stark contrast, there remains a strong argument for use of alternatives. To begin with, a lack of knowledge about medicine lead to some health problems thus, it is beneficial to take advice from doctors and then use it. Moreover, sometimes alternatives cannot affect disease but also impact the body therefore, people should have a face the side effect of alternative medicine. For instance, some medicine for fever can show an effect on the skin because this is not appropriate for the body.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that alternative therapies are necessary for some situations, but it is crucial to take the consultancy of a doctor to use alternative medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10144927536 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7995033616 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1202639717 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135433539857 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553487827025 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03850629207 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088266622597 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152123162662 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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