Work life balance

Essay topics:

Work-life balance

In the modern world, most companies are under tremendous push to deliver work as per committed deadlines. Often the pressure is leaked on to the employees causing them to deprioritise their personal activities. Even if one could manage few hours for leisure, they feign least interest on fitness owing to a myriad of reasons such as fatigue, lack of motivation, feeling hungry as soon as one gets off work.
Firstly, many people find it hard to maintain a routine. Given the uncertainty of the task schedules, one cannot plan a viable timetable. Although some people take measures to overcome this volatility, they are often swamped up with other essential household chores. This results in going to gym once in a blue moon.
Secondly, after all the efforts to go an extra mile during the day, employees lack energy to perform arduous exercises. This often leads them to resort to simple workouts such as walking in the park, and slow breathing. Moreover, the more one uses their brain, the sooner they will find themselves deprived of nutrition. Hence, they quickly grab some snacks thereby postponing the physical movements even further.
To overcome this issue, the best solution is to pay enough importance to work-life balance. Anyone working overtime should be equitably compensated. Enough personnel must be hired to efficiently handle the required tasks. If anyone is found to have worked for more than allotted hours, they should be given forced paid time off.
To sum up, contemporary workstyle is becoming increasingly unsuitable for workouts. This is causing serious concerns to mental and physical wellness. Organisations must act in unison to beat this hurdle. Protecting its employees from unwanted diseases should be of paramount importance for any company.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'feign the least'.
Suggestion: feign the least
...ould manage few hours for leisure, they feign least interest on fitness owing to a myriad o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, after all, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23776223776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70702543368 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671328671329 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9341658431 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8421052632 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110839756924 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307260924401 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059526007956 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556994606744 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751150677024 0.056905535591 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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