Some people believe that charity organization only offer help to people of their own country. But others claim that these organisation should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss no the the view and give your opinion.
Charity work is one of the important component of a country. According to few people charities should provide assistance only to the local citizen, while others adhere to the viewpoint that they should aid to everyone irrespective of the country and individuals. In my opnion, I too second the latter statement due to several reasons.
On the one hand, many NGOs decide to serve their own people since they might be shortage of resources as well as it is the sole responsibility of the local authorities to fullfill the needs of donor in times of unprecedented situation. For instance, charities in developing countries would not be able to financially support the affluent country due their financial constrains and lack of materials but can provide a helping hand to their citizen's. Thus, it is imperative to focus on the charitable works of our own province.
On the other hand, many others suggest that charitable works must not be restricted to a particular country or people rather it should be worldwide. There are several well known institution such as UNICEF, Pulsepolio , MSF that are stable financially and receive myriad of donations both locally and internationally, which can be beneficial to the needy people globally. I too give my affirmation since such charitable works will strengthen the intimate relationship with other nations. To cite an exampme, MSF is one among the canadian NGOs who aims to eradicate TB from the world and for the simple reason this NGO supply free TB drugs. Hence, it is quient essential to work for the needy across the world.
In conclusion, albeit it is essential to spend exclusively for the nation. Nevertheless charity related activities should be made available throughout the universe ,if resources are readily available so that the money put forth can be productive and usefull to the individuals in need without any boundaries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11525423729 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12223398405 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6083077901 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.75 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201131137137 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634585082008 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647994170783 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121320601142 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511825551354 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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