Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There has been an increase in the use of computers such as tablets and laptops in the classroom and as a result, some school of thought believe teachers would no longer be needed. This essay completely disagrees that the role of educators would soon become obsolete in education as they share vital life experiences to children as well as provide motivation which cannot be achieved with computers.
Educators apart from teaching their departmental courses and subjects helps provide essential life lessons to students. This life lessons are formed based on their personal experiences and could be in topics like marriages. They teach this to their student so they do not make regrettable mistakes in life. This life lessons and experiences that are shared helps forms the mindset of most students making them more ambitious and determined in life and cannot be achieved by computers..For example, a pharmacology professor in the university of Benin takes about thirty minutes from his lecture time daily to coach his students about becoming good fathers and better husbands and 80% of them end up enjoying their marriages.
Instructors help provide some form of motivation and encouragement to their students as they are also trained to be confidant and good listeners. Some students may be experiencing some terrible situations and challenges in their studies and may not feel comfortable discussing with a colleague and hence would surely need to talk to their teachers. This is an important and vital role computers are incapable of performing. For example, in the University of Lagos,a medical student experienced difficulty doing well in a particular course after so much preparation and studying, this almost made him have an extra year in school till he consulted a professor in that particular course who explained his lapses to him in details.
In conclusion, educators role are priority and valuable in learning and in schools as they provide emotional support and motivation as well as
sharing important life lessons to students that makes them better in their society and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26409495549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84473950642 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0409381923 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6363636364 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194689657008 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782928045229 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480478785415 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106841065837 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832238332875 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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