Single mothers face more issues to stablish a stable life
Nowadays, to have a child can be a big challange. Actually, to alive in out actual world is getting hard day by day.
I can tell that thinking, for example, in the amount of money necessary to alive, the relationship between person, the customers of our actual society, the difficult involved to find a job and the others things.
A good future, nowadays, is most achieve by person that had the opportunity to studied in a good school, which ones that didn't need to work when child or adolescent, and could spend their time to build the future.
Single mothers can found more issues to allow those condition for their soons.Is hard for a single person mantain himseld and also another person, efforting education, food, and all the necessary things. There's no doubt that in the currents days, there are a lot of difference in the treatment between men and women in the market area. Actually women receive less that men to make the same job, thinking about single woman, this situation can turn hard to herself to achieve a stablish life.
When I was a child, my father passed away, so my mother needs to sustantained me and my syster by herself. I remember her life and her difficults to allow us a good life, she needs to work a lot to give us the necessary mealts and a good education. And also, I remember that she wake up at down many days per week to mantain our home clean and to do the home stuffs. So, based in my own experience, I can tell that is so much hard for single mothers to find a stablish life.
My friend, Ana, lived the same situation than me, but that case, her mother couldn't allow the same condition then mine, so she needed to work ealier to help her mother to mantain the house, and because of this she didn't go to school. Probably she will not find the same opportunites than me in the market area, because she can't even write and read, that will be a big problem in her life.
Concluding, is so hard for a person to have a stablish life, thinking in women, is getting hard day by day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, then, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40909090909 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36553659672 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494652406417 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1381924112 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.785714286 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17768704354 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594719026658 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694634751744 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728732595637 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764425807434 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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