Memorable experiences with family
Sometimes the most memorable experiences are those things that you have been yearning for or the worst thing you could ever experience. When it comes to an unforgettable event of my life, there’s no doubt that a simple dinner with a full presence of family members is out of this world for me.
My beloved three generations' family is not perfect, we don't live in a castle with a white horse and a carriage, and we don't have huge chandeliers hanging on our ceiling, but I'm happy that we stand as a unit and love each other with full of affection. Regrettably, we rarely have time together because we're living separately. My grandparents now enjoy themselves with my parents in Vi Thanh City. My other two aunts are living overseas with their family, namely Taipei City, Taiwan. About me, I’m now studying in bustling Can Tho City with my youngest aunt's family for almost 3 years. Admittedly as it happens, all of us remained busy with our respective businesses and it becomes impossible for us to meet without any unforeseen circumstances.
Based on all the amusing events, I can still recall the memories vividly. It was a beautiful and never to be forgotten spring vacation in 2018. I met my aunts, uncles, and my other seven beautiful younger sisters after a long time they have been living abroad. It was nice when we get-together and passed around 10 days to celebrated the Lunar New Year together. Above all, I must say that I genuinely enjoyed the moment we had dinner together.
Moving onto what happened on that day, my family gathered together on the New Year's Day tray, the table was full of mouth-watering dishes such as caramelized pork and eggs, pickled scallion heads, and pork-stuffed bitter melon soup, etc. Besides, by lightened up with glittering lights, the atmosphere gave me a cozy and homely feeling. We were simply talking about casual things, how life goes on, and the happiness in everyone's eyes made me feel over the moon.
Regarding my feelings about that memorable event, it was a precious short opportunity for us to converge with unselfishness. From that moment, I grasped that "home is where the heart is", we all have scars and flaws, but I don't put it into consideration, because they are my family and no matter what happens, they will always be my family. Later on, we had taken photos to save that pivotal moment of our family. Each and every time I look at the photographs, the memories of that day came flooding back.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, regarding, so, still, no doubt, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2052.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 430.0 315.596192385 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77209302326 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67971568441 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3968410652 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213397279317 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542172288998 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576243126631 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114676184131 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776431039173 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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