Some people think that cities are the best places to live. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
We live in an age when large cities are becoming more inhabited. Living in the city has become double edged sword: on the one hand, local facilities with better services are easily available and there are more opportunities for employment and education as well, on the other hand the city life is too fast-paced and traffic triggers many problems. This essay will look at both options
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In regards of benefits of being urbanite, cities offer better education it is easier to find a lucrative job due to high levels of industrialization. That is the main reason why people move to the city, there are more opportunities to succeed in life. Furthermore, there is a good selection of entertainment areas such as theatres, cinemas, galleries and restaurants for people to spend their leisure time and shops and chain stores are only a stone’s throw from apartments. The services in a big city are always better. On top of that, major hospitals and prominent doctors are found in the country. Hence, it could be plainly viewed that there are many advantages.
When it comes to drawbacks, the city is vibrant and it is hard to find calm and peaceful environment that people could take load off their mind. Lack of rest can lead to some health issues, because the humans need to rejuvenate to work effectively. Another problem is heavy traffic owing to population explosion. Fumes emitted directly into the atmosphere that many city dwellers suffer from medical disorders. Moreover, there are numerous car accidents that results in heavy health issues, sometimes loss of lives. So, I wholeheartedly believe that urban life has severe repercussions.
Putting everything into consideration, I assume that there are both advantages and disadvantages of living in the big city. Choosing between the two may be hard and therefore one should choose the kind of life that is most suitable and more convenient for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05047318612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84338120215 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6079242645 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230222095643 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594507058281 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665297016437 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123043399716 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409781096547 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.