With the advent of social media, more people are getting their news online instead of from print media. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for people who read news online.
With the development of techonologies many people tend to gain information from online sources instead of printed newspaper. The trend certainly beneficial to society as it is free and feasible. While others pressumed, the online media associates with several risks.
Looking at the positive side, there are two advantages on the advent of social media. To start with, one certain merit is free-purchase, people do not spend their money to buy information. This is resulting in encouraging society to read news without being worried about the bill. Another advantage is that it provides an opportunity to access information everywhere by single device. This is because the society has moved rapidly within minutes, pushing them to gain the information quickly. A good example of this is Instagram and Twitter, these online sources provide worldwide recent topics in just seconds.
Despite the benefits of the social media, there is the main drawback associated with it. Lies and hoax of information alongside with the feasible access. As the social media provides free access, it causes on consuming unclarified news. People will believe the deceive news as the truth, and put the news on their own social media account. For example, in 2019, numbers of unclaried information increased significantly, resulting in unstability of media sources and expanding in hate speech on the comments column.
In conslusion, the development of online media obtains two advantages at once as its free purchase and accessible. Nevertheless, with the rise of social media, a significant increase in hoax information emerge around the onlice sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'comments'' or 'comment's'?
Suggestion: comments'; comment's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41796875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90456677987 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1449535045 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.6875 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395561519605 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117290512336 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849327909117 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235624146041 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494064725956 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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