Nawadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation, why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Currently individuals prefer to build theirs business, and work for themselves, instead than being a monthly wage earner. From my point of view, I think that they want to be independent on theirs work, and this obviously had a bad sides on self-employed.
First of all, according to many people, they prefer to be free because that will allow them to set the working hours, also to fit the work with other commitments, which can lead to an improved quality of life. Moreover they run the business and they take the full responsibility of its success and failure . For example, during this pandemic virus covid 19, 70% of employees released from theirs position in my current company, cause of drop down of the oil and gas economy, as results most of them decide to start a new career with theirs own jobs.
Secondly, it is worth considering that, working for your self has bad impacts on the individuals, to began with lack of employee benefits , that means that you won't get sick pay, holiday pay,or any other employee benefits. In addition your working hours may be longer, and irregular than someone who isn't self employed. Moreover, you will pay tax even if your business makes a loss, which can lead to increase your stress levels .
To sum up, I believe that the main cause that makes people work for themselves is the independence, but this certainly has disadvantages, such as, lack of employee benefits, longer working hours,and finally more responsibilities even in failure.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...an lead to an improved quality of life. Moreover they run the business and they take the...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...esponsibility of its success and failure . For example, during this pandemic viru...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f its success and failure . For example, during this pandemic virus covid 19, 70%...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of drop down of the oil and gas economy, as results most of them decide to start ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...areer with theirs own jobs. Secondly, it is worth considering that, working fo...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to began with lack of employee benefits , that means that you wont get sick pay, ...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
... that you wont get sick pay, holiday pay,or any other employee benefits. In additio...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... pay,or any other employee benefits. In addition your working hours may be longer, and i...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...ny other employee benefits. In addition your working hours may be longer, and irregu...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... longer, and irregular than someone who isnt self employed. Moreover, you will pay ...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...omeone who isnt self employed. Moreover, you will pay tax even if your business m...
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Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... tax even if your business makes a loss, which can lead to increase your stress l...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... can lead to increase your stress levels . To sum up, I believe that the main c...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
...e main cause that makes people work for them selves is the independence, but this certainly...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is certainly has disadvantages, such as, lack of employee benefits, longer workin...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... employee benefits, longer working hours,and finally more responsibilities even in f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87401574803 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67969396368 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8497441081 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212505482196 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947214328293 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767576366653 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133787562385 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662580345076 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...an lead to an improved quality of life. Moreover they run the business and they take the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...esponsibility of its success and failure . For example, during this pandemic viru...
^^
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f its success and failure . For example, during this pandemic virus covid 19, 70%...
^^
Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of drop down of the oil and gas economy, as results most of them decide to start ...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...areer with theirs own jobs. Secondly, it is worth considering that, working fo...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to began with lack of employee benefits , that means that you wont get sick pay, ...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , or
... that you wont get sick pay, holiday pay,or any other employee benefits. In additio...
^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... pay,or any other employee benefits. In addition your working hours may be longer, and i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...ny other employee benefits. In addition your working hours may be longer, and irregu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... longer, and irregular than someone who isnt self employed. Moreover, you will pay ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omeone who isnt self employed. Moreover, you will pay tax even if your business m...
^^
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... tax even if your business makes a loss, which can lead to increase your stress l...
^^
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... can lead to increase your stress levels . To sum up, I believe that the main c...
^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
...e main cause that makes people work for them selves is the independence, but this certainly...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is certainly has disadvantages, such as, lack of employee benefits, longer workin...
^^
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... employee benefits, longer working hours,and finally more responsibilities even in f...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87401574803 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67969396368 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653543307087 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8497441081 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212505482196 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947214328293 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767576366653 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133787562385 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662580345076 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.