in many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and state your view.
The increasing childlabour in various countries has now become a debatable one. The juvenile are involved in some part time jobs in a majority of countries. While several individuals encourage this act, a few others are against this practice . Although a stipulated income is generated by these child workers it will eventually lead them to many distractions in studies This essay agrees that the offsprings must not be allowed to work .
There are various patterns of employment given to many child wagers across the globe.which is fully appreciated by many individuals small companies, while others have opposed the initiative, This is the reason that this trend ….the necessity of an adult employee has dramatically decreased. If a toddler can work and achieve targets on a daily basis, then the profits of the company will get doubled which paves way to engage similar workers in the company. Moreover when a child starts to work at his early stage of life he will grow up in a responsible environment and gain wide worldly knowledge.For eg...According to a recent survey 50 % of children become entrepreneurs if they have elementary work experience .
Contrastingly , a number of countries have discouraged the different work culture of many progeny in their society. what's more? The developed society opines that education should be the top priority for the little ones more than the vocational knowledge so that they can envision a bright future. Moreover the current technological advancement demands more creativity from the basic concepts which are taught in their education. For instance , a recent study suggests that 80 % of children who choose to study in their early days tend to outperform the experienced professionals in their career.
To conclude, this essay discussed that education of the young children plays a predominant role in shaping their career . When proper education is bestowed into pupils they will definitely emerge victorious.
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- It s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent 1 However it s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist 2 89
- It s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent 1 However it s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist 2 Discuss both views and state 89
- Inspite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the country still go hungry Why is this the case and what can be done about this problem 56
- Some people believe that Earth is being damaged by human activities Others feel the better it makes the better place to live Discuss both views and state have view 73
- It s generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent 1 However it s sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist 2 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33762057878 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99114431459 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8439764013 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195189559553 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056375747681 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413319130752 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106499809488 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481766976595 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.