Topic: Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people claim that sport is a crucial part of society, whereas others state that it is primarily for recreational purposes. Both sides of the debate will be discussed and my own perspective expressed in this essay.
On the one hand, sport is indeed a leisure activity for the majority of people in community. This is obviously because not so many people play sports professionally, so sports are viewed as a medium for gaining enjoyment, but not financial benefits. Therefore, although sport can be competitive, it often acts as a means of deriving pleasure and unwinding from stresses and strains of work or studies. Additionally, many people usually partake in sporting activities once their own time budget allows them to do so. Take students playing outdoor sports such as football or basketball at recess as an example. Despite the fact that the subject of physical education is taught in most schools, students still engage in these fitness activities in spare time of their own volition.
On the other hand, I concur with the opinion that sports play a vital role in our lives. Firstly, sport is one of, if not to say the best method to boost both mental and physical conditions. As players exercise, stamina, agility and immune system could be strengthened, thus assisting them to avoid the risks of health issues including diabetes or obesity. Besides, doing sport is an effective stress-reliever since it releases oxytocin - a hormone with the function of combating anxiety and depression. Secondly, people can form communities with counterparts having similar interests by taking part in or merely watching sports events. In fact, sport enthusiasts’ clubs help people of all ages stay connected together and also harbor the spirit of sportsmanship.
In conclusion, although in most cases, sports are referred to a pastime, I still hold a belief that they offer more enormous advantages as regards health enhancement and communal rapport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as regards, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in most cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17981072555 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88670338718 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637223974763 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3642400762 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8666666667 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278780236814 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873747490576 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585540483301 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149993787653 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696809146335 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.