Smacking children is the best form of discipline.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Physical punishment to instill discipline in children has been an age-old practice in certain demographics of society. These people claim that chastising is the best way to raise a well-behaved child. This essay will argue why beating a child is completely unacceptable.
Parents always want their children to behave in a proper manner and using physical force against their tantrums seems the easiest option for some. Children and especially teenagers are usually very stubborn and defiant and tend to do things in their own way. Sometimes, they could be very persistent in their unreasonable demands which are impossible for their parents to fulfill. For instance, a child can continuously ask for ice-cream even though there is already an infection in their teeth. Additionally, children can be ignorant about some important things like their safety. Studies suggest that children can partake in dangerous activities just to be appreciated by their peers. These behaviours in children make it difficult for parents to manage them and they go for corporal punishment.
Despite some unreasonable behaviours of the children, the idea of disciplining them by smacking is completely preposterous. This idea of using force against someone weaker to get your way can be deeply ingrained in the psychology of the child. For example, a boy once grown-up can use the same method on their partner or wife to get them to act in a particular way. Also, many recent studies have proven that children behave in the most favourable manner when they see their parents as their friends instead of authority above them. Overall, there are much better options out there rather than flogging a child which is harmful to the child and as well for society in general.
This essay argued that parents who chose violence against their offspring have a flawed understanding of children's behaviour and should be taught about the right practices while dealing with their kids. In my opinion, beating children can never be justified and governments around the world should introduce laws against such practices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ts always want their children to behave in a proper manner and using physical force against their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23511904762 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75250961297 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6884106254 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.470588235 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0958201964208 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038913352005 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418205007377 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641887475486 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151120870588 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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