In some countries, owning a home than renting one is very important for people.
Yes. Of course. In many countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Most people belive that owning a house on their own is more important and defined than renting it. Throughout our lives most people have to rent because their marital status is not right and over time they start trying to get a private home once their financial situation improves. But if you look at the past of people who have achived themendous success, they were definitely renting in their developmental stages. It is certainly a great force for human development and a situation that motivates people to live.
If you are temporarily visiting a country or city, it is better to rent a house but if not, it is better for everyone to have a private home. The advantages of being a private home are many, for example, living comfortably being able to change the interior of the house as he wishes. There are also advantages to renting, for example, if you plan to rent for a short period of time, or if your financial situation is not good, it is better to rent.
But is some developed countries it is common to rent. Some wealthy people are also involved in renting out more houses. They do not have much of a problem renting out so renting is a slave to them.
I think it is better for everyone to have a private home in the are where you live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47177419355 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46678969083 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495967741935 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2843028077 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469321918827 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176067092361 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157238388593 0.0667982634062 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275539925834 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158760304169 0.056905535591 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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