In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
There is a large group of habitants in the world which prefers owning their own home than renting apartments. Because living in the owned home gives a feeling of confidence, comfort and assuredly peace of mind for every person.
In positive sight of this idea I would like to mentione that owning home gives people to make own decisions which belongs their home.It would be decorating or changing their home style, making reconstruction and etcetera. Another positive impact is that we could be more connected to our neighbors and surrounding communities. Residents who have enough money to buy a big and new house and few financial liabilities, their house is an asset and owning a house is a positive situation for them.
On the other hand, buying a house is not cheap nowadays.The estate prices are ever increasing in rate that exponential. This is due to, the increasing price of lands. Therefore, in order to be able to afford home ownership, most people would have to work very hard and save money. Some people could use the credit cards, which would make the house price more and more expensive than buying it. Sometimes it takes years until the loan pays off.
Overall, in my point of view it is good that in some countries people try to buy their own home even though it is not always an easy way. If the residents buy it they will live in it with liberty and confidence than in rented houses.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... own decisions which belongs their home.It would be decorating or changing their h...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rounding communities. Residents who have enough money to buy a big and new house ...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liabilities, their house is an asset and owning a house is a positive situation f...
^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...d, buying a house is not cheap nowadays.The estate prices are ever increasing in ra...
^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n rate that exponential. This is due to, the increasing price of lands. Therefore...
^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to home'
Suggestion: to home
...herefore, in order to be able to afford home ownership, most people would have to wo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66935483871 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50706597693 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8041261741 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286562408933 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929249236739 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788419373361 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182380634919 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582102798161 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
... own decisions which belongs their home.It would be decorating or changing their h...
^^
Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rounding communities. Residents who have enough money to buy a big and new house ...
^^
Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liabilities, their house is an asset and owning a house is a positive situation f...
^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...d, buying a house is not cheap nowadays.The estate prices are ever increasing in ra...
^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n rate that exponential. This is due to, the increasing price of lands. Therefore...
^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to home'
Suggestion: to home
...herefore, in order to be able to afford home ownership, most people would have to wo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66935483871 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50706597693 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8041261741 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286562408933 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929249236739 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788419373361 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182380634919 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582102798161 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.