You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic.
Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
You should write at least 250 words
As the world grows every day, population explosion not only cripples the world economy but also posing deadly threats in terms of health disasters to humankind. Sadly, there is no escape from many deadly diseases like AIDS, Cancer etc. but with the latest technologies in medical sciences, its almost possible to prevent various common diseases via vaccinations. But ironically, still many parents are against immunizations. I personally believe that immunizations should be made legal. This essay would highlight all favorable points.
Despite the proven medical history which shows great results on humankind after immunizations as millions of people can be saved from deadly common diseases. Yet , ironically many parents opt out of it, the reason being lack of trust as they believe having them would cause more harm than good . For example - Some chicken pox vacccines do give mild fevers to kids but parents fearing that would simply abandon these vaccines .These fears, which are completely baseless in todays time and hence must be overpowered with the legalised manadatory immunizations saving thousand of innocent lives.
Furthermore, the weaker section of society doesn't often go for these options due to either unawareness of the benefits, lack of funds or even lack of facilites. For example - It is not uncommon to see that many immunization events dont even land in rural areas due to various political reasons depriving people of the benefits. Legalising Vaccinations in required areas would take care of these basic issues providing better lives in all sectors of society.
To conclude, In times of fears, confusion and unawareness , its much better for government to come forward and take the lead in saving millions of lives by legalizing the whole operation rather than leaving this in unexperineced hands and save from many mandmade disasters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35714285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75689170925 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2048273378 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141371101666 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539971709699 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458180899938 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786944683485 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572032770646 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.