Is the mental strength important for success in sports or is it more important to have strong and fit people in sports. Discuss both views and give opinion.
Some people believe that the success of sports depends on the strength of their bodies, but there are others who believe that their spirit is the foundation of success in sport. In my opinion, it takes muscle strength rather than mental endurance to win sports.
On the one hand, mental strength is certainly important while playing games. The players should be extremely concentrated and not forget about their goal.. In addition, they must be able to play without losing their hearts when the other players are stronger than they are during the game. The other players can win the game if they lose their hearts, but if they have strong mental strength, they will win the game.
Muscle strength, on the other hand, is much more critical. In physical games, this isn't a mind game, so if you want to win the game, you need muscle strength rather than mental strength. But when you want to win, you really need mental strength, too. If soccer players, for example, don't have muscle strength, they can't sprint, jump, or do something. But at the moment, there is more muscle power than mental strength. Of course, mental stability will help them stay focused without feeling dejected, but I’m sure that they can’t win without mental strength.
In conclusion, players require both physical and mental strength to win a game, but physical strength is much more important than mental skill in athletic competitions, as success in such sports depends entirely on a player's ability to compete tirelessly for the duration of the game.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93436293436 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31845485774 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501930501931 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
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Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.105535629854 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726641660218 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1891878861 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688015282521 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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