Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because spend so much time on cell phones, online games, and social networking websites.
How far do you agree or disagree?
It is an irrefutable fact that the unprecedented advancement in technology has provided children with lots of entertaining gadgets, which in view of some people, making it an arduous task than it was ever before, for parents to teach their children. I accord, though there might be some bad impact of cell phones, games and social media, over the studies of children, its benefits are too good to ignore, if they utilize them properly.
To commence with, there is deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that since, after the outbreak of pandemic, all the schools are closed and teachers are conducting online classes, mobile phones help children to attend their classes, who cannot afford to buy a laptop. Secondly, if students play video games for a small period of time, it will not only act as a stress buster for them, but also sharpen their minds. Along with that it will break the monotony from the daily schedule of students as well. Hence, mobiles and video games have made study easier and entertaining for students, if they use them wisely.
Another pivotal aspect of using technology is that it will help children to connect with people of their same age from distinct part of globe, through social media. Which will definitely help them to clear their concept by discussing the topics with each other. For instance, my cousin is studying to sit the CRN test and to make study easy, she has joined a group on Facebook, which made it trouble-free for her to learn difficult concepts. Similarly, not all the information is ever available in a single book, so in this case children can take help from Google and other useful websites. Certainly, social media and other website will assist children in making study easier and understandable.
In summary, wise use of technology will definitely make study a less burdensome task for children, along with making it more interesting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f students play video games for a small period of time, it will not only act as a stress buste...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ct part of globe, through social media. Which will definitely help them to clear thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88990825688 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57848040419 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593272171254 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4838662164 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127734389717 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044562373489 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033076802167 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824248261924 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253986049035 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.