You should spend around 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the ratio of water consumption in six regions across the world, divided into three categories including industrial, agricultural and household purpose.
Overall, it is worth highlighting that water used for agriculture accounts for the largest percentage in most of the regions: Central Asia, Africa, South America, except in North America and Europe which is mainly providing for industrial use. However, it is also noticeable that in South America household uses the highest ratio of water among all regions.
According to the graph, most of the specified areas reveal an identical water usage pattern. In these regions the discrepancy between the percentage of water used for the agriculture and others purpose is much remarkable, especially agriculture uses an overwhelming quantity of water in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia and South America account for 88%, 84%, 81% and 71% respectively. In Central Asia, Africa and South America, the proportion of water used for household is the second biggest user, make up 9%, 7% and 19% respectively, followed by industry, while in South East Asia industry enjoys second highest demand with 12%, followed by the household sector.
In contrast, North America and Europe experience a completely different pattern. Europe area primarily uses water for industry, making up the highest proportion among the remaining regions over a half of the total. Likewise, 48% of water is prioritized this purpose in North America, contrasting to 10% of that in South America. It is also evident that all six areas use an inconsiderable percentage of water for domestic purpose, apart from South America with 19% is the most significant consumption level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...12%, followed by the household sector. In contrast, North America and Europe expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, second, so, while, apart from, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37407407407 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85162336747 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503703703704 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 283.868780488 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.498657706 43.030603864 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19129483054 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900106111504 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359576342115 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129385535219 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280618404339 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 40.7170731707 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.