today the life expectancy of people is much higher than before some people think that older people should continue to be involved in the workforce to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, every people want to live king-size life. The life expectancy of a human is much higher than past. Few people believe that senior citizen should continue to be a connection in their workplace. This essay will explain the side impact of the statement. It is described in the following paragraphs.
To starts with, there are plenty of reasons, which push me to think, that is not a good idea. First and foremost, the employment of young people will reduce due to this therefore, the unemployment ratio will increase and that creates problems of crime and poverty in their respective countries. For example, In the U. S. A, there is no age limit for doing a job so, senior citizens continue their duty. And, the crime rate and unemployment ratio are in peak position. The government will look the situation and take reasonable steps.
Furthermore, technologies are upgrading on daily basis, which are exotic for older peoples. It is harmful to companies or factories to hire old peoples because their work speed is extremely low. Also, they are unfamiliar with new technologies. For example, D-mart is hiring only experience employers, which generates an impact on their market value and profit, both are in the lowest number as compare to other companies.
To conclude, if the old aged peoples start or carry on their work, that shows effects on unemployment of new talent, which lead them for unsocial work. The most important factor of my disagreement is, they are not aware of new technologies. After the age of 60, peoples shall take a rest and enjoy their remaining life with their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...tive countries. For example, In the U.S.A, there is no age limit for doing a job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86397058824 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59776144233 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7787769916 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8235294118 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198522311781 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616321556389 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073337333398 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130976464187 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918770519869 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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