In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Today there is an increasing number of adults living with their mothers and fathers despite having completed studying or started a career. This essay will argue that although living under the same roof with families comes with many burdens, the benefit of saving a lot of money can far outweigh any drawbacks
When people decide to live with their parents despite maturity, it will put a strain on the family themselves. That is to say that instead of staying in rented accommodations, the expense on food and facilities will rise, and the internal space will be reduced, hence, the discomfort is unavoidable. For example, a government recent report showed that families have to spend an extra 30% amount of money for every one adult in a house. However, I believe this burden can be alleviated because adults can support their families with the money from salary, as they are grown-up and can earn money from society.
Living with parents can save a lot of money for the future life of an adult. It is undeniably that renting or buying a house or a flat will cost an enormous amount of money, not to mention the furniture expenditure and the living expenses. Choosing to stay in parents’ houses can help adults save money for the long-term future, when they are in marriage or retired. For example, after living separately from parents, my sister spent 15 years paying by monthly instalment to own a house, instead of only 10 years if she stayed with parents. I believe this opportunity is conducive to the future life and will be accepted by many mothers and fathers
In conclusion, the chance of saving a lot of money far outweighs the supposed disadvantage of creating burdens, while continuing living with parents despite being matured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89597315436 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56694739995 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.988789309 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193463770911 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866063197681 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536536044606 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141705077182 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030664633021 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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