In some countries people prefer to live alone more often than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Solo living is increasingly popular in developed countries. It is evident that an increasing number of people embrace solo living in a number of countries in the world. Personally, I am of the opinion that this lifestyle brings about numerous benefits to individuals, but it takes a heavy toll on society.
On the positive side, single life has beneficial effects on individuals. The first advantage of single life is that singletons tend to become independent. That is because people living without a partner have far more freedom than people married and they do not need to take care of children. Research has shown that parents have to spend at least 2 hours per day looking after a child aged 5-14. An additional advantage of living alone is that people living by themselves can live the way they want. Living alone means that one-person households have their own space since living alone affords plenty of privacy. For example, people living on their own may potter round the house and curl up with a book without interruptions.
On the negative side, solo living poses myriad social problems. One major drawback of solo living is that it has a negative impact on the economy in the long run. Singletons help a little to push forward the economic growth due to the reluctance to buy expensive things. Compared to married people, people who live alone do not need to buy much household commodities since parents tend to spend a lot on commodities for their children, such as clothes, toys and so on. For example, in Australia, on average couples with children in the 5-14 age group reported a much larger average weekly grocery spend than singletons under 35, at $336 compared to $122. Another negative aspect of solo living is that the country may be in severe shortage of labor. That is because solo living has been linked to the lack of labor on account of low birth rate. Research shows that Japan has experienced the absence of labor since more people opting to live alone push the birth rate to decrease.
In conclusion, it is true that more and more people prefer to live alone. From my perspective, living alone brings not only positive impacts but also detrimental effects so people should choose the way they want to live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81347150259 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53924603179 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525906735751 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4069202275 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309454757222 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944326371609 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680802474045 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195633983559 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441587210254 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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