Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports, while others think that people should have freedom to do any sport or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that the authorities should prohibit extreme sports for the sake of player themselves, while others argue that people should be allowed to take up any sports or activities of their interests. I would agree that people should have the right to participate in any sport they choose.
To begin with, there are two mainly reasons why risky sports should be prohibited by the authorities. Firstly, these kinds of sports are very dangerous that threaten the safety of players. For example, racers usually face to serious situations when they fail to control their speed, and they may get serious injured or even get skilled. Secondly, many extreme sports such as boxing have more violent actions that have a negative impact on thoughts and behaviors of audiences, especially youngsters. As a result, they could not control their feeling and tend to use violence to solve problems. Therefore, government play a vital role in prohibiting dangerous sports and help to reduce the rate of crime in community.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that people should be free to take part in any sports as they wish. It is true that these sports can help players and viewers release stress and bring more enjoyments for them when they overcome a challenge and scare of themselves. Secondly, people have the rights to do whatever they want so personally I think that their interests should be respected rather than forbidden by law. Moreover, extreme sports also help them to improve their physical health to overcome challenge and have more motivations in inventing modern facilities to support them.
In conclusion, although there are several reasons that government should prohibit dangerous sports, I firmly believe that we should respect player’s interests, and they should use modern facilities to safe when playing these sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57948315236 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2962634142 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.230769231 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336482883477 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128236377438 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100311080337 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224540385163 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108367430083 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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