Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. What are the causes? Suggest some measures to reduce traffic in big cities
Traffic congestion is one of the most problematics in big metropolitans that need to solve currently. This essay will discuss about the causes and suggest some remedies could be used to deal with difficulty.
There are some primary reasons why traffic jams happen in major urbans in a wide range. First of all, this problem is caused by an influx of people and mean of transports on the streets with negative attitudes, specially in peak hours. As a consequence, bad behaviour people not only lead to traffic congestion but also accidents and they become a threat to each nations. In addtion, the local infrastructure is poor and the governments are weak to tackle with this issue. For instance, there are a lot of buildings are constructing, bumpy streets which are an obstacle to vehicles owners.
However, there are some viable solutions that need to apply as soon as possible. Firstly, reducing private transportations on the streets is essential. To be more specific, people should switch their cars, motorbikes to public transportations such as railways or buses and they need to raise awareness of traffic culture. Secondly, government must propose policies for this concern. For example, repairing roads with no roughness is necessary.
In conclusion, as the reasons and measures i meantioned above, specially people's awareness, i believe this problem can be solved and it no longer become threaten for citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12173913043 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83270128982 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 230.0 20.2975951904 1133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1178.0 106.682146367 1104% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 230.0 20.7667163134 1108% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 133.0 7.06120827912 1884% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233100667114 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233100667114 0.084324248473 276% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136442305241 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352593586603 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 117.7 13.0946893788 899% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -161.97 50.2224549098 -323% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 93.0 11.3001002004 823% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.9 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.78 8.58950901804 230% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 94.0 10.1190380762 929% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 94.0 10.7795591182 872% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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