Nowadays road congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities. Some people believe that it is a good idea to construct wider roads to resolve this issue. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? What can be the solution in your opinion?
In recent times, masses are using their personal modes of transport for several reasons; owing to the trouble related to gridlock is increasing. Some individuals advocate that broaden the horizon of roads is a reliable step to address this worrying concern. I am not favouring the given idea. This essay would not only support my view point but also suggest some other measures to sort out the problem of tailback in the upcoming paragraphs of this notion.
To commence with, there are manifold ways to restrain this burning issue. First and foremost, by initiating public transport regime can curb out traffic jams. To elaborate it, frequent services of government vehicles can be given to attract the citizens for the use of these modes of transport. Besides it, the another idea to avert this menace the establishment of flyovers, can mitigate the amount of vehicles which are run by mobs inside the cities. In other words, if authority invests money on the construction of flyovers, individuals smoothly run out, and reach to their destination point without entering into the urban centres;therefore, to take over the problem of road congestion flyovers can be made by the government.
Some other effective techniques can be used by governing body to get rid from serious concern. One of the considerable way is that price of fuel can be enhanced in order to reduce the volume of personal cars and bikes on the roads to eradicate the problem of tailback. To be specific, since in nation like India majority of population is living below the poverty line if the price of energy resources such as petrol along with diesel is being higher then it will become unaffordable for the inhabitants as a consequence they will shift towards others efficient transports like car pulling instead of using their own vehicles hence, the trouble of road congestion can be solved out. For instance a report published by the traffic controlling agency in 2020 the percentage of using personal
modes of transport has dropped down by 17 % due to this modification. Subsequently, the implementation of rigid rules and regulations can be helpful to restrain this burning issue. It can be explained as unless the stringent rules are not made by the authority it is impossible to eradicate this trouble from its roots, so regime can make some strict rules as if one vehicle at one home. As a result, this approach can reduce the degree of traffic jams on highways.
To recapitulate, although the tailback is spreading its roots all over the globe, government is not launching some restricted policies towards it, as it is a worrying concern collective measures should be taken to curb this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 448.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90401785714 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74072876959 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511160714286 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 448.0 20.2975951904 2207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2197.0 106.682146367 2059% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 448.0 20.7667163134 2157% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 109.0 7.06120827912 1544% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251749511878 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251749511878 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137949813548 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401535385496 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 225.6 13.0946893788 1723% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -383.24 50.2224549098 -763% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 178.0 11.3001002004 1575% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.62 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.8 8.58950901804 347% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 181.2 10.1190380762 1791% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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