In recent years, life has become more stressful than it has ever been . as a consequences, more and more people are suffering from stress- related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase? What do you think can be done to overcome the current problems?
Despite a massive assistance of modern development alongside the new invention of technology, human life is becoming more and more stressful in compared to the past days. And as a result, more stress- related distress in people are being appeared tremendously. This essay examines its causes that are contributing to increase and some likely measure to tackle it
Although, there are many factors that are contributing to increase it, a prominent element is a competitive society created by new technology. An evolving technology demands a man-power according to human's literacy. People who has high literacy they get more opportunities, and illiterate become unemployment. Consquently, mental pressure has been grown for earing a living. moreover, rising health problems by poor environment condition could be a another reason. every day, every year, people are suffering from new disease due to polluted environment. Irregular activities,indiscriminental use of natural resources and emission of rising traffic has created new infection as well as unhealthy life that is a huge reason of stressful life of this contemporary society
On the other hand, many strides could be used to decrease this problems, first and furthermore, a proper use of technology inventions should be done though it is a great achievement. Government should mobilise the strong rules and regulation in unplanned urbanization, rising emission of vehicles and exceptional use of natural resources as this mind-set can help to decrease the environmental problems that leads in diseases inclination, and stress could be less.. In addition, a strong alliance between government and public should be made since it help government to find out the fundamental needs and daily disruptions of public that would be great way to make equality in society instead of competitive, consequences
In conclusion, despite the competitive society and many health problems, stressful life can be solved with installing strong rules regulations over random use of property and invention.
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| 2021-04-06 | anoj adhikari | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45833333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20485736035 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544871794872 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 312.0 20.2975951904 1537% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1703.0 106.682146367 1596% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 312.0 20.7667163134 1502% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 119.0 7.06120827912 1685% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286851189819 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286851189819 0.084324248473 340% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178545700355 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831437336566 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 160.3 13.0946893788 1224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -262.12 50.2224549098 -522% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.87 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.62 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 64.0 9.78957915832 654% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 126.8 10.1190380762 1253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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