Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue that we need to accept it
rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this opinion, because I believe that we still have time
to tackle this issue and reduce the human impact on the Earth's climate.
There are various measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent, or at least mitigate,
climate change. Governments could introduce laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions that lead to
global warming. They could impose “green taxes” on drivers, airline companies and other polluters, and
they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power. As individuals, we
should also try to limit our contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy efficient, by flying
less, and by using bicycles and public transport. Furthermore, the public can affect the actions of
governments by voting for politicians who propose to tackle climate change, rather than for those who
would prefer to ignore it.
If instead of taking the above measures we simply try to live with climate change, I believe that the
consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example, I am not optimistic that we would be able to
cope with even a small rise in sea levels. Millions of people would be displaced by flooding, particularly in
countries that do not have the means to safeguard low-lying areas. These people would lose their homes
and their jobs, and they would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other countries. The
potential for human suffering would be huge, and it is likely that we would see outbreaks of disease and
famine, as well as increased homelessness and poverty.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must address the problem of climate change, and I disagree with
those who argue that we can find ways to live with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, well, at least, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85046728972 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49794900389 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551401869159 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 321.0 20.2975951904 1581% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1557.0 106.682146367 1459% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 321.0 20.7667163134 1546% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 80.0 7.06120827912 1133% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281128518072 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281128518072 0.084324248473 333% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779672646023 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845691836266 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 161.9 13.0946893788 1236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -245.88 50.2224549098 -490% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 127.3 11.3001002004 1127% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.33 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.3 8.58950901804 271% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 130.4 10.1190380762 1289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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