Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems. People should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the country side.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
t is considered by a number of people that to solve the traffic and transportations issues people ought to swift from an urban area to a village side. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the statement, because there are other ways to tackle traffic and transportation problems.
Firstly, to reduce the traffic congestion in the cities then the government need to allocate a huge amount of money to construct new road networks. If the people have ambled road space and separate route for each type of vehicle then chances of traffic jam will be decline. One clear example can be seen in the United Kingdom, after the construction of rapid road networks in the city and provide various paths to people to drive the percentage of traffic reduced.
Secondly, the transportation system can also aid to decrease the congestion issue. This can be done by implementing more public buses with less ticket price. If people use more public mode of transportation for conveyance, therefore fewer vehicles available on the road and issue can be curbed. For example, The United States spend the highest amount of funds on the improvement of modes of transportation compared to other countries, as result the traffic problem is less in the United States.
In Conclusion, Some people believe that the best way to control and solve the traffic and transportation issue by transferring people from city to town. I fully disagree due to the fact this issue can be tackled by the establishment of new road networks as well as provide various options in public transportations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: T
t is considered by a number of people tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95219570355 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6502342342 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.090909091 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254319093727 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102210311472 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723445974263 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169626246158 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470915551471 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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