Many people around the world are choosing to move to lives in cities. What problems do people experience in big cities? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller towns?
There are many people around the world who prefer a city as a place for living. Although life in cities has many benefits some problems should be taken into account. I suppose, that governments should motivate the population to choose medium-sized towns for regions development and more comfortable and healthier life for people.
Most cities are overcrowded, in addition, the ecology, as a rule, is not satisfactory. The infrastructure of many modern cities being formed in previous centuries does not cover the needs of a growing population. Consequently, all cities are trying to solve problems with traffic jams, social transport system and residence for citizens. Next, the ecological issue is another problem that should be managed. Since there are many industrial factories situated in cities, there is a challenge for governments to relocate them outside for improving the ecological situation. Thus, choosing to move in cities everyone should consider about problems, which exist in it.
To my mind, it would be better for the population and economy of a country if governments create comfortable living conditions in smaller towns. Firstly, towns growth can become a trigger for economic development of all region, moreover, it creates new job places and improves infrastructure. Secondly, people choosing towns for living will have a friendlier everyday environment. For example, they spend less time on their way to work and as a result can be more with family and friends. In addition, there are many health benefits as locally produced products, less transport and industrial pollutions. Considering all the benefits, I believe, governments should be interested in the motivation of people to move to smaller towns.
To conclude, basing on existing big cities' problems connected with overcrowding and ecology, I consider that it would be the wise decision for governments to develop towns and encourage the population to move there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ho prefer a city as a place for living. Although life in cities has many benefits some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, i suppose, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40327868852 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99181720185 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554098360656 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3914358126 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342746661456 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115324186563 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859183925291 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218218935689 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341267317125 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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