Today, due to advanced medicine people are living longer. Because of this older people are projected to outnumber younger people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages.
Healthcare is a fundamental need of the citizens of a country. Today, due to development in medical science, average life expectancy has increased, and thus, predictions state that elderly people, in the future, can overshadow the youth population. This essay will throw a light on both the pros and cons of it.
To begin with, the longer life expectancy gives us the opportunity to serve our country for a longer period and enjoy life here on earth. Secondly, Old age people can overlook the grandchildren while the parents are busy working in any family. Thus, it can lead to better nourishment of cultural and traditional values, which can be a vital role in shaping the future of a country.
On the other hand, due to longer lives, the population will rise which can be an extra burden on the resources available. The government has to pay pensions to older people which will put extra pressure on public money. Furthermore, there will be lesser opportunities for the younger people which will result in the unemployment of the youth. As a result of which countries like Germany have to import younger people from other countries for a stable economy.
To conclude, increasing the population of the older generation may result in a burden to the society and the government but at the same time, it can not be neglected that it has its own benefit in building a better nation and a better world. Hence, it is a treasure to have older people and thus it is government's as well as our duty to provide facilities and to look after them.
- Compared to the past more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student s home country 78
- Many famous sports players advertise sports product Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product such as cell phone or service e g medical treatment Do you agree or disagree 67
- The tendency of human beings to copy one another is increasing in popularity Is this a positive or negative development What can be done about it 73
- In many countries the legal driving age is 18 years old Some people believe that it is the right age to learn how to drive a car whereas others say that the minimum age should be 25 Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tural and traditional values, which can a be a vital role in shaping the future of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71851851852 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74190165603 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1875689845 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0833333333 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182366363454 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651044080608 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417504061946 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985820799191 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335684506523 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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