Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the present time, thanks to the development of use technology and the use of machines, humans are able to approach the remote natural environment such as the South Pole. This advanced progress in the history of humanity has both merits and shortcomings for the environment and humans.
Once the scientist can access to a new environment, they can find new resources which stand a good chance of replacing the current ones such as oil or gases. This promises a future for the world as the novel resources may be more environmentally friendly than the old ones. Besides being able to find new supplies for energy, humans will discover some species that have not been seen before or types of habitats that are suitable for the endangered animals. This perspective means governments can address the problem of conserving animals in the foreseeable future.
On the other hand, the approach to the newfound land may also have drawbacks as humans will destroy the environment by doing researches, developing tourism, and exploiting natural resources. Scientists take samples from the novel land to conduct researches, disrupting the natural state of the environment. In addition, people are bound to exploit the benign land by hunting animals and cutting down trees for trade while some will convert the newly discovered environment to tourism. Consequently, the new environments soon are destroyed completely, which worsens the problem human are already facing: the degeneration of the environment.
In conclusion, the accessibility to remote natural environments is a two-sided sword. On a sensible level, it will bring merits; however, if humans excess the threshold, it will cause adverse aftermath.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30740740741 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96712901562 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9618863172 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184194859622 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695109588712 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454714107262 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116337807898 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561803314687 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.