It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that allocating public money for encouraging a healthy lifestyle to prevent illness is more beneficial than for the treatment of illnesses. Personally, I partly agree with the notion as both a healthy lifestyle and treatment are important for the well-being of citizens.
On the one hand, a healthy lifestyle can improve people’s resistance to certain diseases. Specifically, a healthy lifestyle requires people to engage in more physical movements, adopt a balanced diet, and omits different types of harmful habits. In this way, the metabolism and immune system (enhance the effectiveness) in their body become stronger and are able to hinder the development of certain illnesses. Therefore, it is essential to spend financial resources on raising people’s awareness about a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, public money should also be spent on the treatment of ill people. In fact, there are many hereditary diseases that can not be prevented by adopting a healthy lifestyle. Besides, mental problems which may occur as a result of excessive workload or hectic study schedule are becoming ever-increasingly prevalent among individuals nowadays. Consequently, treatment of such illnesses is significant for the well-being of citizens, leading to the need to allocate public resources to tackle the suffering.
To conclude, despite debatable schools of thought on determining how public money can be spent, I endorse the hypothesis that the governments should grant financial resources to preventative measures and illness treatment. While encouraging a healthy lifestyle can hinder the development of numerous diseases, treatment can cure illnesses that are inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67843137255 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15248752955 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3745122599 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319526776133 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11710850616 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775690849307 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19652861824 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657059236954 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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