In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While it is maintained by some that to succeed in sport physical strength is needed, other people believe that particularly mental strength lead for successful career. Personally, I consider the perfect receipt of prosperous path in sport is a combination of physical and mental skills.
On the one hand, it is unlikely that without extraordinary physical shape person even have a possibility to become a middle class sportsman. The basic step of performing in sport is a ability to be physically stronger than opponents. Indeed, for some kind of sport this condition is more sufficient than for others. For example, athletics, swimming, fights are require to be faster, resistant and stronger. Consequently, it is impossible to become a successful sportsman if do not develop physical skills.
On the other hand, all types of sports are require to be mentally resistant. This resistance help to recover after losses that especially crucial for all sportsmen as it is highly unlikely not to lose at all. Furthermore, mental strong helps to be patient in everyday workouts and save optimism before important competitions. For instance, there are interviews with champions in which they tell that in many cases exactly inner tough spirit and right mindset help them to win.
Though people may vary in their opinions, I believe that both physical strength and mental mindset are the vital parts of success in sport. The most important thing is that altogether these skills create synergy effect which multiple results of performing sportsman. For example, even spending most of the time in training football players need a strategy and mental support from their coach during the match. There are many examples of winning from the worst situations after supporting trainer’s speech.
While it is sometimes believed that the secret of success in sport is physical strength, there are those who consider mental mindset is more sufficient. To my mind these two qualities are equally contribute for developing successful sport career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62765957447 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32200195387 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.481203529 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119180899956 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582669786184 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748255842924 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111082071267 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770394982617 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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