Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the past decade, awareness to save the environment has rose to a large extent. It is because, the climate change and other calamities are happening frequently and so, many people think that it is their responsibility whereas, some debate that it is duty of government. Both the sights have different outcome which will be discussed in following paragraphs along with my personal view.
To start with, some of the population says that governing bodies like State Pollution Control Board (SPCB), should become strict towards the pollution producing agencies, such as, dye manufacturing units, colour producing companies, chemical factories and many others. Such industries use water for the production of different types of goods and the contaminated water is straightaway pushed into the river without proper treatment. Punishing the act of such companies is in the hand of government. Others, complains of not having proper infrastructure which should be developed by the government.
On contrary, construction of roads and bridges for buses and other mass transport systems, vanishes many green lands coming to their way. After developing those infrastructures if people are not using the transport systems all the efforts and money used in, comes to zero along with the mark of killing the trees. It is our duty to use those facilities and contribute towards greener environment.
Indeed, the government is in control to stop the bodies who are polluting the environment and construct the infrastructure but, in my view, it is us who need to support on such decisions of the government and follow the rules made as such. As soon as every citizen understands their own duty, third party would not have the point to involve to take care of the environment.
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- Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, third, whereas, such as, in my view, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21403508772 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92193706646 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6663804938 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171991661982 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493117334065 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511495295132 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100128479514 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754116600481 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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