Some companies sponsor sports to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, many enterprises tend to financially support sport as a promotional material. While it is argued that this tendency may have some drawbacks, I believe that sports world can significantly benefit from it.
It is true that support from companies that hope to promote their products can do harm to the public. It is because when companies with unhealthy products fund a sports activity and require the famous sportsmen to join in the marketing campaign of these items, the audience tend to use them on a regular basis which can be detrimental to their health. For example, when fast food company sponsor a football club, there is possibly commercials in which the footballers seem to support and eat fast food everyday while in fact, they do not. As a result of these players’ influence via the adverts, people are likely to purchase fast food and eat them which does great harm to their well-being.
However, I believe that the benefits that sponsorship from organisations brings to the world of sport can outweigh its drawbacks. Firstly, this budget can contribute to the replacement and upgrade of sports facilities. For example, the grounds used for football practice would be equipped with better devices and equipments to ensure the security of the players and the quality of practising. Moreover, with the sponsorship from companies,sports talents of the nation can be found and properly fostered. This is because these fundings help organize sports competitions on a regular basis, of which valuable and appealing prizes may attract more participants to take part in. As a result, the best players can be chosen for the national teams in order to compete with other countries in a worldwide championship.
To conclude, although it cannot be denied that commercials of unhealthy products from sponsors can be harmful to the audience, I believe that the world of sport, especially sports players and the national sports teams can be considerably beneficial from these companies’s support.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-20 | Phuong1810 | 78 | view |
| 2023-09-20 | Phuong1810 | 61 | view |
| 2023-07-21 | pwlihnkt | 89 | view |
| 2022-08-01 | MichaelP | 61 | view |
| 2022-07-23 | eyraen | 67 | view |
- Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Nowadays education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offsprings to study in other countries However this trend has its detractors Do you agree or disagree 78
- It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together while others thin that more intelligent children should be taught separately Discuss and present your own opinion 56
- People have different job expectations for jobs Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently What are advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint 67
- Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent technological developments To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ompanies with unhealthy products fund a sports activity and require the famous sportsm...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sports
...ver, with the sponsorship from companies,sports talents of the nation can be found and ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19325153374 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89892881069 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9468765216 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.230769231 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103941600665 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408557687087 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028643103405 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763794090519 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237034993207 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.