The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
It is public concern that the number of young people committing offenses is significantly increasing. Some individuals believe that teaching their parents with parental skills is a best method to mitigate juvenile offenses, I completely agree this view.
There are several reasons why educating parents is important nowadays. The first reason is that adults would work many hours on a daily basis to make money to cover the monthly costs. As a result, they do not have enough time to take care of their children as well as taking part in kid educational class. Therefore, they even could not understand their offspring’s personality and have harmful behaviors such as being angry with them. This lead to build bad habits at early stage of young people one of which is bullying their friends. Other evidence is that many kids participate in unlawful acts such as shoplifting in stores to own things which they really love because their parents do not know that they lack money.
Moreover, kids tend to imitate the other’s activities while parents usually play and talk them. If adults are instructed how to communicate and treat properly, their children would copy these things and gradually become well-mannered citizens in the society. For example, Trang Moon is a well-known mother in my nation because she spends three years to caring her kids, reading moral books for them and teach them how to be a polite person. Finally, her kids are greatly intelligent and show respects to the others.
In conclusion, as the reasons mentioned above, I would argue that the best solution would be to minimize youth offenses is to teach their parents with parental skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03610108303 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58849548566 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631768953069 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4227409266 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23536210785 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810489381269 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960458434125 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167587622395 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867482476617 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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