More and more work is carried by machines in all areas of lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Undoubtedly, with the assistance of science and technology humans are advancing by leaps and bounds. A number of heavy and difficult tasks can be done with least effort with the help of machines. There are many pros and cons of using machine. But according to my perspective, definitely Advantages outstrip disadvantages.
On the positive side, machines complete the task assigned to them very quickly and easily. Also the chances of errors are negligible. As using machine saves our valuable time and People can spend more time with their family members and they can pursue their favorite hobbies. By the use of machines, we can save a lot of energy.
Additionally, Macines are being used in Medical sectors in these days due to their accurate and quick results. For instance, eye test can be done within few minutes with the help of latest technology. Secondly, a lot of data can be managed and accessed conveniently as we can see in banks, at airports and in various Government offices. Use of machine in the industries boost production and economy of the nation expands.
On the negative side, Machines has replaced manpower creating unemployment resulting in poverty. With the growing use of machines in every sector, humans are responsible for the pollution and Global warming. Operating machines is not a piece of cake, it requires training and skills. Many accidents occur due to failure of machines. Their installation is very expansive also.
To be concluded, Machines have both benefits and drawbacks but merits outnumbers the demerits. Machines are Fast, accurate and also lowers the cost of products, But their overuse should be prevented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79674757212 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603703703704 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6978721691 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4210526316 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0794210729225 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235271165108 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263660769389 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0462365477832 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235901053476 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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