Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by many people that providing advertisements are the best way of persuading others to purchase items or products. Nevertheless, I wholeheartedly believe that advertising is inappropriate due to the fact that it does not get attention of the readers and customers.
On the one hand, designers of the products often try to draw appealing arts in order to attract customers. Although people are not interested on the text and reading, most of them are tended to visit the page of the product because of the arts that are painted on the advertisement. In addition, many marketing specialists originate unique sales and offerings so that customers can not reject them. Particularly it can be seen in social medias like Instagram, where people can see variety of different advertisements with attracting offerings to their products. Thus, advertising has a success in persuading customers.
On the other hand, because some people find advertisements as fraud, they do not pay attention to them and try to avoid it. The reason of low attention from society is that there are many crimes in the marketing sphere which is connected with promoting the products. Moreover, even if the advertisement is qualitative, popular and well-organized, it seems annoying to society. For instance, after seeing numerous advertisements, many people become aggressive. As a result, in order to avoid ads, softwares and adblockers which ban those messages are often installed by people to their devices. Therefore, advertisements are no longer attractive to people.
In conclusion, even though advertisements are created to persuade and attract people, they are no longer effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37121212121 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2733234586 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.510659285 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.285714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268367570591 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975264670592 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707423730053 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168849746233 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373327373032 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.