Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in the world business. Discuss both views and give your own opinionl
There exists an opinion that the biggest advantage of international cooperation is the preservation of the environment. In contrast, others believe that the world economy take the most advantage of the international collaboration. In this essay, I am going to analyze both views before stating my personal perspective.
On the one hand, it is noticeable that the international collaboration plays a vital role in the environment’s protection. Nowadays, the humanity has to face up with several environmental problems which are beyond the solving ability of any particular country. Therefore, cooperation is necessary to find out feasible solutions as soon as possible. For instance, the air pollution in some areas all over the world have reached the alarming rate leading to the fact that governments must promulgate strict laws to reduce the amount of toxic gases released in to the atmosphere in every countries. Moreover, scientists are also empowered to launch international research and share their innovative ideas on this field, such as how to apply renewable energy into transportation to decrease the number of private vehicles.
On the other hand, international collaboration also brings numerous benefits to the world business. A lot of developing countries have chances to achieve the goal of maximizing the economic profit due to the support and sponsorship about finance and technology from developed nations. For instance, Vietnam has become the second country on the rice output exported to the international market and this product has grasped the enormous attention because of its high quality. Furthermore, the cooperation between countries also contributes to the emergence of multinational companies. It is undeniable that multicultural companies have gained more and more popularity and prestige. Thus, they provide an abundance of job opportunities to many people; especially those are bilingual or multilingual.
In my opinion, the international cooperation has brought more advantages to the world economy than the protection of the biodiversity. Admittedly, within the economic collaboration on massive scale, any less developed countries get rid of fiscal crisis and even improve the citizens’ quality of living.
In the nutshell, both the environmental issues and the world business get beneficial from international cooperation. However, looking into some aspects, global business development still has been much more spectacular and impressive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72972972973 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32511965876 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0039778763 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.777777778 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165063217611 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507505090111 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050418761375 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917769986329 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267086699751 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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