An increase in production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes and possible solutions?
There is no denying that the natural environment is being damaged and one of the causes of this is the increase in the output of manufactured consumer goods. This essay will discuss the reasons for this and put forward some solutions to this issue.
To begin with, the increase in the production of consumer products harms the environment in two ways: the methods of production and the product attributes. To maximize profits, in many corporations, the price of the mechanisms always takes priority over the damages they cause to the natural environment. For instance, to reduce the cost of processing the superfluous waste from the factory, they decided to dump those toxic things into the ocean which leads to the death of aquatic animals and vegetation. Furthermore, many types of products such as chemical-by products, disposable goods are harmful to the natural environment because of their poison and decomposition ability.
Actions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts of consumer goods on the natural environment. First, companies should utilize eco-friendlier materials. For example, instead of using plastic bags, they can use cloth bags when selling products to the customer. Moreover, many governments are also encouraging the innovations and development of the more sustainable mechanism of products. To give an example, any state in the U.S offers tax breaks and incentives for businesses using renewable energy, and some firms are even allowed to purchase green energy at cheaper prices than traditional fossil fuels.
In conclusion, there are several reasons that the environment is severely affected by the increase in the production of consumer goods. To settle this problem, governments and companies must join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly by utilizing greener materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... To give an example, any state in the U.S offers tax breaks and incentives for bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43448275862 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96600637506 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8744248393 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328226363365 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102826729124 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996538698514 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176793649686 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583376834425 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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