Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The graph showed radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. According to the graph, there is nobody watched and television at 6:00 AM but there are around 10% people listened to radio at that time. To 8:00AM, people who watched TV were increased but not worth considering. Besides, radio listeners were increased dramatically to over 30% then lower about 20% at 10 AM, lower and lower till 2PM at noon than higher but not for long than lower from 6PM to 4AM to the day after. But TV watches were opposite. They low at morning to 12PM then higher and higher and climax at 8PM. Maybe it was dinner time so people had time to gather with these family to watch TV show so it around 50% number of viewers. It’s also high and then slowly lower from 10PM to 12PM. Then lowest at 2AM at the midnight. Then it keep balance from 2AM to 6AM.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 652, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this family' or 'these families'?
Suggestion: this family; these families
... time so people had time to gather with these family to watch TV show so it around 50% numbe...
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Line 1, column 818, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeps'?
Suggestion: keeps
... lowest at 2AM at the midnight. Then it keep balance from 2AM to 6AM.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37341772152 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18303057615 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0604456377 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0286538202554 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100460937906 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0166995302969 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0286538202554 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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