Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development
In this day and age, it is inevitable that advertisement has gainned a large scale of ubiquity among every individual in our society. This surge however is not only advantageous but also negative for each individual. From my perspective, I believe this trend brings about more pros than cons
On the one hand, advertisement is useful for manufacturers as well as consumers. In more detail, with ingenious marketing tactic, a company can expand their market since they are able to promote their products or services to a wider range of customer. Therefore people can have more choices and ultimately compare the price or qualification of different brands while they are shopping. As a result, there is no doubt about the crucial role of commercial campaigns to our world today
On the other hand, the intense appearance of ads can cause a great deal of shortcomings to the general public. Many individuals claim that they find it annoying or even aggressive when they have to see so many advertisements on their daily basis. The fact that advertisement are placed everywhere and pop up anytime is considered as an extreme form of nuisances. As an example, while I was enjoying my favourite movie, it would be really frustrated to see an advertisement pop up and totally spoil my flow
To conclude, advertising is such an amazing tool for enterprises as well as their customers. Otherwise, it is also the main cause of many frustrations and nuisances when people are forced to watch them even though they do not demand for. In my opinion, I suppose its benefits outweigh its drawbacks as without advertisement, companies have no way to inform their products and individuals would have fewer choices
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-10-29 | vidung | 89 | view |
| 2024-08-24 | Tuan Harry | 73 | view |
| 2024-07-18 | MEBC Class | 80 | view |
| 2024-07-12 | MEBC Class | 75 | view |
| 2024-07-11 | trần ngọc tuấn | 67 | view |
- Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees while others have free entry Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages 73
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 81
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income Unfortunately tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world Do you think that benefi 84
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... services to a wider range of customer. Therefore people can have more choices and ultima...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...use a great deal of shortcomings to the general public. Many individuals claim that they find ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, i suppose, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9649122807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98246439627 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.8417627775 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.636363636 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113459499727 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430681716321 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340272133205 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069572785866 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367268433186 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.