Today, more people are travelling than ever before. Do the advantages of travelling outweigh the disadvantages?
It is indisputable that tourism has increased so much over the last decades and more countless people find travelling irresistible. While there are serious negative consequences of this development, I believe that they pale in comparison with the benefits
On the one hand, there are some aspects of travelling which raise cause for concern. One evident weakness is that it could expose us to danger, diseases and even death. It can be seen that many visitors, especially those who travel abroad, are vulnerable to illnesses and these may cost them a large amount of money to be treated. To exemplify during the coronavirus outbreak in 2020, a large volume of international travellers were tested positive for this plague and felt it hard to recover. Another fringe downside point is that tourists when having a change in their scenery often suffer from fatigue due to jet lag and food poisoning.
On the other hand, despite such grave issues, I believe that the positive impacts of travelling would prove to be more fundamental. First, having a vacation improves your mental health. Many people get used to the hustle and bustle of daily life and they often feel tired and exhausted. As a result, they have a desire to visit divergent locations just to get away from the hectic pace of life, which is believed to be the source of their stress. For some people, wandering abroad is even a cure for depression and anxiety. Second, travelling expands the boundaries of your knowledge. By visiting other places around the world, you may be more empathetic with different people from different social backgrounds and even gain a deeper knowledge about their cultures and lifestyles. Another benefit of travelling is that it enables people to be reunited with their family. Today, travel is less costly than ever before and consequently, people are eligible for going overseas, for example, to meet their parents and their siblings who are currently living far from them. Family ties can be maintained and strengthened thanks to the greater opportunities to travel.
In conclusion, I strongly opine that the merits of travelling for travelers are greater than the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey pale in comparison with the benefits On the one hand, there are some aspects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09217877095 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.715562238 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594972067039 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8423015035 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.235294118 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258604234756 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829429283579 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758132269025 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169763531047 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062711544875 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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