WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.
The pie chart compares the proportion of household spending on different fields in a nation between 1950 and 2010.
It is clear that apart from Housing and Education, expenditures on all other categories witnessed a rapid increase during the research period. Noticeably, families in this nation spent more money on food and other stuff after 20 years.
In 1950, the percentage of household expenditures by Housing was highest, at 72,1% whereas the figure for Food was much lower, at only 11,2%. Meanwhile, 6,6% and 4,4% of average household spending were Education and other categories respectively. At the same time, there was 3,3% of family expenditures spent on Transportation, compared to 2,4% of expenditures by Healthcare.
Twenty years later, spending on Housing saw a dramatic decrease of around 50% to only 22%. By contrast, there were increases in the figures for Food and other kinds, staying at 34% at 34% and approximately 19,2% respectively in 2010. Similarly, While Transportation experienced a slight rise to 14%, the figure for Health care also grew gradually to roughly 4,5%. Additionally, Expenditure on Education went down slightly by nearly 0,3% to 6,3%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on food and other stuff after 20 years. In 1950, the percentage of household exp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for Food was much lower, at only 11,2%. Meanwhile, 6,6% and 4,4% of average hous...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion went down slightly by nearly 0,3% to 6,3%
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt down slightly by nearly 0,3% to 6,3%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32978723404 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05946793529 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632978723404 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5548138475 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.2 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164380787646 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683349896605 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630537160461 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116502114647 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734822449444 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.