Some people think that economic development is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others argue that economic development is damaging the environment and needs to stop. Discuss both views and give your opinion
This is a fact that economic development is significant to Paves the way to success. Some people opine that poverty and starvation could not be mitigated by developing economically instead it is spoiling atmosphere and it should be stoped. I support that a nation should focus on the economic progress to compete with other countries.
On the one hand, poverty and hunger could be curbed through economic development. First of all, To end up poverty higher authorities should provide quality education to children that would make them able to get better employment opportunities in their adulthood. As a result, they can have higher living standards as well as could be able to cut off the serious issue of poverty. To be more specific, as per the recent survey there are many people living under poverty line, even they can not meet their basic needs such as food, shelter and clothes. Therefore, if they have jobs then they can also buy luxurious things. Secondly, managing water and other resources can help in removing poverty as majority of people rely on agriculture to earn bread and butter. As a consequent, they can earn money to meet their needs and will contribute in reducing poverty and starvation. Finally, the figure for underprivileged people is inclining day by day so government should provide access to social services and the important thing is that the development should be in healthcare, education etcetera.
On the other hand, according to my view point economic development should be emphasized. Firstly, in order to create high wages job for the people so economic development and poverty are related to each other. To explain more, economic development either create lucrative jobs or bring economic growth. Besides this, everything depends upon the revenue that the nation is earning as all the sectors of economy can be developed by allocating money to all fields of the nation such as medical, education and public facilities. Apart from this, making society a better place to live is an important activity of government. So, government should focus on providing better livelihood to people by spending money on healthcare. Last but not least, trades in the country could be regulated via money . For example, industries provide employments to people do government should spend money on these areas.
To conclude, Although people are think of that poverty and hunger could not be declined through the economic development, i view that economic development is an integral part of a nation and to survive in faced paced world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1169451074 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78155570755 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5735816741 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275157493433 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948666812582 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861930729806 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216953569497 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659068692665 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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