Topic: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays many businessmen usually magnify in their marketing about their products are good in some aspects. Some people believe it is a sign of positive development whilst I strongly agree with those who argue that this issue is detrimental in many ways. This essay will examine both views and suggest some probable reasons.
Turning to the causes that lead to this issue. Firstly, when marketers emphasize their products in a particular range, it may make the buyers become curious and constantly thinking about it. As a result, they then might purchase those goods just to make sure that if the product’s advertising is fit with its quality or not. This will result in an increase in the company’s profits and they will have a chance to expand their company’s scales. In other words, they can manage to develop many multinational companies with various branches around the world. In addition, if their products can satisfy the users, then it probably can be well-known amongst people by word-of-mouth or social media platforms throughout the world.
Yet apart from many the reasons as well as benefits of this marketing type, there are still negative in many sides. Firstly, if the products fail in satisfying the customers, those people will become frustrated or irritated because of the fact that those products can not be good as their expectations. They then criticize it and the company will probably be on the verge of bankruptcy or even can lead to the emerge of some depraved cultures.
In conclusion, there are many reasons that lead to this issue but mainly come from the company’s profits. If the goods are high quality and then the company can exaggerate about it, otherwise, it will be severely criticized among users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ple will become frustrated or irritated because of the fact that those products can not be good as their...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...verge of bankruptcy or even can lead to the emerge of some depraved cultures. In conclusi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, then, well, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02413793103 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64509732024 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541379310345 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8162083999 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22097626388 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809088610634 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682298070372 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141120098555 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899393413362 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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