Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that children should have the freedom to choose their own things which they will eat, wear, read, play, watch and so on. Others say, parents should not choose on children's passion because if they always follow children's choices one day they will become selfish. In my opinion, parents should focus on children's choices so that they can think of themselves as independent. But parents need to keep balance for children in their lifestyle.
On the one hand, it is important to choose yourself. By the way, children can make decision and independent. If children make decision rapidly, parents can believe the good decision of children for the future life.What children say they can do will be more successful.
On the other hand, about making decision for children is able to become selfish. When they grew up and successful for career and lives, they become more confident for yourself and will not remember to members of family, selfish for friends and companions. For example, my brother always being take care by parents and everyone, very confortable in the studying and working. But when he is more successful for his career, he is a playboy, no longer listens to his parents, no longer takes care of his family. As a consequence, he did failed the career and must borrow much money from friends and family to pay. His life become very poor.
In conclusion, give a choices for children is very improtant and necessary. Also we should sure that the choices give chance for children to improve and safe for life, but it should be balanced
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Suggestion: a choice; choices
... become very poor. In conclusion, give a choices for children is very improtant and nece...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, by the way, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86516853933 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46934380461 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3867396907 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141202152621 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563315768935 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049933850265 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091132003717 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549826839166 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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